The bar chart below shows the three main causes of land damage in four different areas in the world.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart illustrates the three primarily reasons of land devastation in four various areas in the world, namely Africa, Asia, Australia and Europe.
Overall, it is obvious that Africa and Asia have the highest figure for land destruction caused by all three reasons. Besides, breeding is the most popular reason for leading to land destruction in four regions shown.
In Asia, the amount of land destroyed by tree-cutting is the largest, at 500 million hectares, while the amount of that is the second largest in Africa, at about 370 million hectares. Australia and Europe both have around 100 million hectares land destroyed by the same reason.
Land devastation causing by breeding accounts for just over 1200 million hectares in total among of four areas, the largest in Africa and the smallest in Europe. The amount of land damaged by farming in Asia is 4 times larger than that in Europe, (at nearly 420 million hectares compared to about 120 million hectares). Africa and Australia’s land damaged by farming are 300 million hectares and over 50 million hectares respectively.
- The bar chart below shows the three main causes of land damage in four different areas in the world Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 79
- People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives but few people achieve it What are the problems if people try to achieve this balance How to overcome these problems 65
- The table below compares actual and predicted figures for populations in three different cities Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant. 73
- Percentage of car ownership in Great Britain according to household 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13888888889 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64581547092 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7121209785 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135540663555 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719417960767 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435493940405 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101272980452 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473995705721 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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