The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Bar chart illustrate 2014 Electricity production and consumption in Top 10 countries. obviously China was the highest electricity producer and consumer among the other countries. Korea Rep was the least producer and consumer in 2014.

The united states was on 2nd Stage and it production was 4099 billion kwh, it almost four times higher than Russian production. Russia was third place on the list.Russian electricity production nearly same as consumption. there is no huge over production like the United States. japan was the fourth highest electricity producer and consumer in the world. India was the fifth place in the, list is production was871 billion kwh. however it exceed Japan annual electricity consumption .there is huge gap between production and consumption relative to Indian Electricity production. Canada was in fifth place ,Canada Electricity production about 117 billion kwh. France in 7th place .however Germany has outstanding figures among the other countries because its consumption higher than the production

Finally apart from united States and China other countries only produce less than 1200 billion kwh in 2014

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, third, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79766666626 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548571428571 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3156823409 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4545454545 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161645666188 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782446656251 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718712168258 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11743358408 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551062936109 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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