The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATE AVERAGE CO2 EMISSION PER PERSON IN FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN BETWEEN 1967 TO 2007. IN GENERAL WITHIN GIVEN 40 YEARS THE UNITED KINGDOM AND SWEDEN CO2 EMISSION PER PERSON WAS DECLINED. ITALY AND PORTUGAL CO2 EMISSION WAS INCREASED.

WHEN CONSIDERING 1967 TO 1977 DECADE APART FROM UNITED KINGDOM OTHER THREE COUNTRIES CO2 EMISSION WAS INCREASED. ITALY AND SWEDEN HAD SAME UP TREND GRADIENT OVER THE DECADE. HOWEVER, WITHIN NEXT DECADE (1972 TO 1987) SWEDEN CO2 EMISSION WAS REDUCED BY MORE THAN 3 METRIC TONS PER PERSON. MEANWHILE, PORTUGAL AND ITALY CO2 EMISSION WAS CONTINUOUSLY INCREASED UP TO 3.5 METRIC TON AND 7 METRIC TONNES RESPECTIVELY. BY THE END OF THE THAT DECADE. IN 1987 SWEDEN AND ITALY CO2 EMISSION WAS 7 METRIC TONNES PER PERSON. WITHIN 1987 TO 1997 DECADE PORTUGAL HAS SHOWED THE HIGHEST RATE OF INCREMENT OF CO2 EMISSION. HOWEVER, IN 1997 TO 2017 ITALY CO2 EMISSION WAS NOT CHANGED AND PORTUGAL ALSO HAS BEEN ABLE TO CONTROL THEIR CO2 EMISSION. TECHNICALLY THE UNITED KINGDOM CO2 EMISSION WAS CONTINUOUSLY DECREASED OVER THE TIME PERIOD. BUT THE UNITED KINGDOM HAS THE HIGHEST CO2 EMISSION OVER THE GIVEN 40 YEARS

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...PORTUGAL CO2 EMISSION WAS INCREASED. WHEN CONSIDERING 1967 TO 1977 DECADE APA...
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...PORTUGAL CO2 EMISSION WAS INCREASED. WHEN CONSIDERING 1967 TO 1977 DECADE APART F...
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...EN CO2 EMISSION WAS REDUCED BY MORE THAN 3 METRIC TONS PER PERSON. MEANWHILE, POR...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, apart from, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99484536082 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47747317095 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458762886598 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7093164682 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5384615385 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294636566584 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134933461417 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742478182053 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290405760848 0.15604864568 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609889618072 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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