The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart gives information about electricity generation and utilization in ten top-ranked countries in 2014.
Overall, in most of the ten countries, electricity production was obviously higher than its consumption and United States accounted for the largest difference between these two statistics. In addition, Germany was the only country to utilize more electricity than what they produced.
During 2014, China hold the highest electricity production at 5.398 billion kWh, followed by 4.099 billion kWh in United States. While these top tier countries produced more than 4000 billion kWh, nearly 1100 billion kWh was the highest figure among other nations.
In terms of electricity usage, the leader was also considered as China and United States ranked the second at 5,322 and 3,866 billion kWh, respectively. Moreover, China consumption rate was ten times higher than that of Korea, Rep. which was at the bottom list for consuming only 449.5 billion kWh and also regarded as the lowest utilization figure among the ten nations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (China) must be used with a third-person verb: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
...what they produced. During 2014, China hold the highest electricity production at 5...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46296296296 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69258240357 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0660938532 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266886737618 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130267211604 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107222876185 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198934592197 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118252631462 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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