The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and
consumption of electricity in 2014.
The horizontal bar chart illustrates the top ten countries in the world for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Overall in China the number of production and cosumption of electricity is highest among these ten countries.
In China a high number of production of electricity which was 5.398 billion kWh and consumption was about 5.300 billion kWh.Next was the United States after China in electricity production and consumption where consumption is 3.866 billion kWh that was lower than production about 200 billions.
Rating of Russia, Japan and India were almost the same these countries production between production and consumption of electricity was about 50 billion kWh.And other 5 countries which were the lowest rating are Canada, France, Brazil and Korea.These countries production were about 600 billion kWh and consumption about 500 billion, but production of Germany was lower than consumption 60 billion kWh.The lowest rated was Korea.The amount of electricity produced in Korea was almost 10 times as low as production in China
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44242424242 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95603536637 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.376643493 43.030603864 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.5 112.824112599 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.25 22.9334400587 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344087537223 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.292943906548 0.103423049105 283% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.218474733676 0.0843802449381 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292943906548 0.15604864568 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218474733676 0.0819641961636 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.2329268293 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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