The bar chart below illustrates the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. First we can see,China and usa were two of the nation which uses and creates most electric in in the world. China with the number of production and consumption in 2014 are 5398 billion kWh and 5322 kWh, korea were create and use them at least with sequence 485.1 and 449.5. There were 3 nations create and use more than 1000 billion kWh include:China, USA and Russia. in the others side just korea have the numbers of production and consumption less than 500 kWh. except for Germany, all of another countries production more electricity than use them, so Germany was special from the others the electricity they production and consumption are 526.6 and 582.5 so germany go opposite the trend in 2014.
in conclusion. the trend in 2014 are production more than consumption ( expect germany) and china was create and use most of electricity.
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...lion kWh include:China, USA and Russia. in the others side just korea have the num...
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Suggestion: created
...nsumption expect germany and china was create and use most of electricity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, at least, except for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8950617284 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70314696337 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.964878878 43.030603864 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.6 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210187940105 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132728423217 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156792490528 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15075247272 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689844312536 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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