The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

This bar chart displays the ten countries for the number of electricity in 2o14 and how production and consumption differ in this. As is evident, Chinese people were more reliant on electricity than other countries.
It is immediately apparent that the most common country for generating and using of power was China, being around 5,300 billion kWh. The second most common country was the United States at about 4,000 billion kWh. The third most common country was Russia at roughly 1,000 billion kWh, closely followed by Japan and India at 1,000 and 900 billion kWh respectively. Finally, the smallest was Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea Rep., accounting for approximately 400 to 600 billion kWh.
It is interesting to note that nearly all countries experienced greater production than using in 2014, except for Germany, in which the production figure was lower than consumption counterpart, at precisely 526.6 billion kWh for the former and 582.5 for the latter. Another apparent figure worth mentioning was the almost equal between the production and consumption of energy in Russia by 19 billion kWh.
From an observation, the primary country for making and using electricity was China while Korea Rep. was the lowest country for both.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, third, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25870646766 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66283046261 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.982561745 43.030603864 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.166666667 112.824112599 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26622826348 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166010065463 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114438036648 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194556664996 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095420933244 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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