The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by AydaShah on Thu, 06/13/2019 - 09:59

The bar chart illustrates ten countries that they had the most production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Firstly, China produced and used the most electricity in the world. After that, the United States had the most producing and consuming of electricity. China produced 5,398 kWh electricity and consumed 5,322 kWh while the United States electricity production was 4,099 kWh and its consumption was 3,866 kWh.

In following, Russia, Japan and India were in the rank of third to fifth in electricity production and consumption. However, the number of production and consumption in these countries are less than one-fifth of China.

France, Brazil and Germany generated between 561.2 kWh to 526.6 kWh electricity and they consumed 462.9 kWh, 455.8 kWh and 582.5 kWh electricity respectively.

Finally, Korea.Rep war the last country in top ten rank in 2014. This country generated 485.1 kWh electricity whereas it consumed 449.5 kWh.

To sum up, According to the chart China and United States produced the most electricity in the world in 2014. All of countries production war more than consumption but electricity production in Germany was less than electricity consumption at this country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Rep
...tricity respectively. Finally, Korea.Rep war the last country in top ten rank in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, third, whereas, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44973544974 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95468420143 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470899470899 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.925303632 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211882043324 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119723380837 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942791211175 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152634217263 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988016799457 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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