The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The comparison in transport options of young people in four different countries is displayed by the bar chart, shown in percentage.
Overall, the most popular transportation is car, except in France. However, Europeans are not keen on motorcycle.
As per data, there are a very large majority of Italian youngsters who choose car, mostly reaching to four fifths, while the USA ones preferences on this transport are as similar as those living in the UK at three fifths. This is contrasted to three aforementioned countries, car witnesses the lowest proportion in France at only two fifths.
For bicycle choices, the rate of those is the lowest in United States, accounting for only one in ten. Furthermore, American percentage opting cycling takes up at closely a third in addition to the figure for two rest nations at approximately a tenth. Lastly, the figure for motorcycle in all nations is below two in ten.
- The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important 78
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 56
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 78
- The graph below shows the percentage of part time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... reaching to four fifths, while the USA ones preferences on this transport are as si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, third, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02631578947 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94016389202 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4446136414 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120321721455 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561600593305 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980379793698 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999045968396 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120917674919 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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