Given is bar chart comparing the expenditure of consumers on six types of products in four European countries. It is immediately apparent that photographic film was the largest majority to be spent for all the countries, meanwhile, Britain had been spending more than any nations on every product. The expenditure measured in thousand pounds sterling.
First and foremost, the UK expenditure on photographic film accounted in approximately 170.000 pounds sterling and became the biggest spending among the bar charts. On the contrary, Italy spent only around 150.000 pounds sterling o this product, in fact to all types including personal stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, as well as toys.
Looking at the detail of the rest 2 countries, France was spending more than Germany on all products which varied from around 150.000 to almost 160.000 pounds sterling, while Germany constantly accounted on 150.000 pounds sterling on all products. Interestingly, Germany's expenditure on Toys was the same with France at almost 160.000 pounds sterling and became the biggest spending of France.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ets, perfumes, CDs, as well as toys. looking at the detail of the rest 2 countries, ...
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...s, France was spending more than Germany on all products which varied from around...
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...roducts which varied from around 150.000 to almost 160.000 pounds sterling, while...
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...y accounted on 150.000 pounds sterling. interestingly, Germanys expenditure on Toys was the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, well, while, as to, in fact, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53801169591 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87633705711 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3007497975 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14930131574 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832663259799 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849506742399 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10412532524 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332676385906 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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