The bar chart gives information about how the proportion of dwellers who were in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town changes between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart gives information about how the proportion of dwellers who were in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town changes between 1995 and 2010.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that the highest percentage of people who born outside Australia and the figure of that who were born in Australia in cities witnessed a gradually increased from 1995 to 2010. Opposite with that, the proportion of people who born outside Australia in rural areas experienced an significant fell down from 40% to under 10% in 2010.
The percentage of dwellers who were born outside Australia always stay the highest position of the chart from 60% to 80% in the period of 15 years. The number of people who were born in Australia also witnessed a gradually increased from 50% to more than 60%.The proportion of people who were born in and outside Australia in 1995 and 2010 experienced a slightly decreased from 20% to under 20%.
The number of citizens who were born in Australia saw a significant decreased from 30% to under 20% in 1995 and 2010. With the figure of that, people who were born outside Australia witnessed a considerably fell down from 40 % to under 10%.
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- The bar chart gives information about how the proportion of dwellers who were in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban rural and town changes between 1995 and 2010 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7729468599 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58306887684 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391304347826 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.996753127 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.142857143 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.622119136237 0.215688989381 288% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.381934427241 0.103423049105 369% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.255920051087 0.0843802449381 303% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.515908022567 0.15604864568 331% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.280818076301 0.0819641961636 343% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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