Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People and many governments opinions differ as to whether or not economy progress is the most important goal. While there are some people strong arguments against that others types of progress are also necessary in the country developing process, I still believe that the economy is the most imporant progress for a country to develop.
There are several reasons why people agree that economy have the most necessary ways in the way to develop the country. Firstly, having had a lot of money, the country can improve the country in a lot of sides like education, public building, transportation. Secondly, in education, a lot of kindergartens, schools, including primary schools, secondary schools, colleagues and universities will be opened for the students to have a lot of chances in studying. The more places for them to learn, the more peoples go abroad. Thirdly, we could mention that in the public places, will have more hospital for the elderly people who needs a lot of their times going to the hospital. Some parks can serve as places for children to play some physical sports. More and more skyscrapers, apartments will be built, that people will have more spaces to living. Furthermore, A lot of people live in the country, so that the transportations are also need to have, by having more modernized building for railways like buying some new trains, come up with some new trains invention or airlines, including new planes, large airports will be had more chances for the alien visit the country. So that many people will go to the country, and the developing process in economy will be better. So that many governments believe that it is the most importants ways to improve the theirs country.
In spite of the above arguments, I support the views countries need others types the progress including economy might be considered beneficial to improve the country. Firstly, if more money spends, there will be have more immigrants go to the country to have the better jobs, so that the country have the problem that there will overload the country, and there might be a unsafe places for them. Unless the country has some cultural like old building, some ethnics peoples, animals, fruits, natural places, the country is not a good place to visit. This chances can improve the revenues for the country. Next, on the side of the citizens: Criminals such as robbers, thiefs, burglars are raising, by that citizens feeling nervous when they living in this area. Then, there will be more people visit the country and more and more students who need to study abroad; if the governments don’t have the laws or rules for people to obey, the country will be overloaded. Furthermore, we have to mention the climate, more vehicles like cars, motors, trucks should be bought by a lot of people due to the boost of the immigrants, so that the enviroments they live might be not good and that will not be a suitable places for foreigners to visit the country. If the leader of the country think that the others types of progress are not importants, there will be a dilemma, and it is hard to solve this problems
In conclsion, the many types of progress has its drawbacks, but I believe that the benefits outweigh them in the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...le and many governments opinions differ as to whether or not economy progress is the most important ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...y, so that the transportations are also need to have, by having more modernized buil...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trains'' or 'train's'?
Suggestion: trains'; train's
... some new trains, come up with some new trains invention or airlines, including new pl...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ping process in economy will be better. So that many governments believe that it is the...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: the; theirs
... is the most importants ways to improve the theirs country. In spite of the above argumen...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...verload the country, and there might be a unsafe places for them. Unless the coun...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
...he country, and there might be a unsafe places for them. Unless the country has some c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hermore, we have to mention the climate, more vehicles like cars, motors, trucks ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
...ot good and that will not be a suitable places for foreigners to visit the country. If...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, while, as to, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2684.0 1615.20841683 166% => OK
No of words: 556.0 315.596192385 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8273381295 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57103671731 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404676258993 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 506.74238477 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2851911069 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.2 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225855843163 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093775519844 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091167398466 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189173421632 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109903429808 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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