The bar graph illustrates changes in average number of car journeys made by residents and non-residents to the city center over a 10 year period from 1996 to 2005.
From the graph it is clearly evident that, majority of the residents travelled to city center up-to 1999. However, non-residents travelling to the city center are always very less when compared to residents.
The journey's by residents after the introduction of parking meters have dramatically plummeted to 5000 in the year 2000. The trend continued fluctuating for more two years. During 2002 and 2003 the Westgate street and Park Lane were closed due to traffic. As a result, the residents travelling to city center almost became half (4000) when compared to the initial years and the trend increased slightly to 4500 in 2005.
On the other hand, the trend of non-residents journey's increased steadily from 5000 to 8200 by the year 1999. Though, the parking meters introduced in the city it doesn't effected the non-residents traffic. Their trend was kept steady up-to the year 2002. In contrary, the closing of Westgate street and park lane has effected the outsiders very badly. As a result, their trend plunged down to 3000 and maintained steadily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...more two years. During 2002 and 2003 the Westgate street and Park Lane were close...
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...elling to city center almost became half 4000 when compared to the initial years ...
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...ily from 5000 to 8200 by the year 1999. Though, the parking meters introduced in the c...
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...arking meters introduced in the city it doesnt effected the non-residents traffic. The...
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...e year 2002. In contrary, the closing of Westgate street and park lane has effect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06435643564 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69119857127 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9364502426 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195364917809 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748419694718 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794278322102 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147353366771 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751146516383 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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