The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010
The book is one of the most interesting things on the planet that everyone has seen and touched, but understanding its great value is only a true reader. The bar chart shows the average of books from library which were borrowed by people in Lammertown Public Library between 1991 and 2001. The pie chart indicates data about library's membership in 2010.
Overall, there are seven types of books from Lammertown Library. On the top of favoured books is Romances which is the most interesting while riding. Moreover, language books were the lowest by borrowing and people who get them in average made up 100 people between 1991 and 2001.
In more details, at the end of 20's century, people borrowedess amount of books then in 2001. In addition, the stablest between seven all books was Autobiographies, may be because of people are not interested in life of celebrities and scientists. As compared with 1991 the number of book which has been borrowed are rised in 2001. As I wrote before in the top are Romance books which was 1000 books in 1991 and 1400 in 2001.
All in all, the number of books lent in most categories increased with the exception of the categories of crime novels and children’s fiction.
To sum up, in pie chart, obviously seen that gender constituents of library members. Although, more than half of pie chart it is approximately 68% women riders and left over are men.
- Modern society nowadays suffer from juvenile crime. This rate is becoming increase. 78
- The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010 78
- With the increasing use and development of new technology,many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. 56
- The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world 73
- Central and local government make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programs for the poor. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n Public Library between 1991 and 2001. The pie chart indicates data about librarys...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in life of celebrities and scientists. As compared with 1991 the number of book w...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...books lent in most categories increased with the exception of the categories of crime novels and chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, then, while, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79752066116 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67497120317 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54958677686 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7102264504 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3076923077 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34108580035 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132353520021 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13577954065 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181765795877 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143711764228 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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