The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the urban population in 3 continents and the whole world over the period between 1950 and 2000 and including the prediction to 2030.
Overall, it is evident that the population of Latin America was always highest compared to other parts of the world. Besides, the whole world experienced an upward trend over a given period.
Starting at 10% in 1950, the population of Africa increased tremendously to nearly 40% in 2000. While the figure of Asia in the initial year was slightly higher than that of Africa, which was about 11%, there was a soar to the same number of Africa in 2000. Meanwhile, Africa's population is expected to rise to around 50% in 2030, that of Asia is expected to grow larger than Africa which is approximately 55%.
Whereas the statistics of Latin America was about 42% in 1950, that of the whole world just accounted for 30%. There was a jump to 70% in the population of Latin America during the next 50 years before expecting to hit a peak of 80% in the final year. Similarly, the whole world is expected to see a growth from less than 50% in 2000 to 60% in 2023.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the urban population in 3 continents and the whole world over the period between 1950 and 2000 and including the prediction to 2030.
Overall, it is evident that the population of Latin America was always highest compared to other parts of the world. Besides, the whole world experienced an upward trend over a given period.
Starting at 10% in 1950, the population of Africa increased tremendously to nearly 40% in 2000. While the figure of Asia in the initial year was slightly higher than that of Africa, which was about 11%, there was a soar to the same number of Africa in 2000. Meanwhile, Africa's population is expected to rise to around 50% in 2030, that of Asia is expected to grow larger than Africa which is approximately 55%.
Whereas the statistics of Latin America was about 42% in 1950, that of the whole world just accounted for 30%. There was a jump to 70% in the population of Latin America during the next 50 years before expecting to hit a peak of 80% in the final year. Similarly, the whole world is expected to see a growth from less than 50% in 2000 to 60% in 2023.
- It is true that many art galleries and historical buildings are primarily visited by people from other regions not the locals While there are several reasons to account for this phenomenon some measures should be taken to make these places more attractive 61
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- The idea that nowadays new staff in a particular company licking fundamental interpersonal skills are widespread There are several possible reasons behind this phenomenon and steps need to be taken to tackle these problems There are two primary reasons wh 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, similarly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56585365854 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49608378572 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531707317073 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5614329166 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50610348588 0.215688989381 235% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213984557504 0.103423049105 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205304803595 0.0843802449381 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364288210074 0.15604864568 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.236755093191 0.0819641961636 289% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.