The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

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The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.

The bar chart provides information about the percentages of divorces in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015.

Overall,Sweden experienced a downward trend while Finland showed on upward trend throughout the period.both countries divorce rates had some fluctuations. Although Finland initially had a lower rate,it outraged Sweden at the end of the period.

Sweden's rate was about 45% in 2011 being higher than Finland's rate by approximately 8%. then, it rose to almost fifty percent in 2012. However,the figured showed a gradual decrease to about 47% in 2013 and continued to decline steadily to the end of the period,reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015.

percentage of divorces in Finland was less than 40% in 2011 and it decreased in 2012,when about one third of marriage in Finland ended with a divorce (as opposed to almost half in Sweden).However, a figure experienced a steadily growth during the next two years. It rose to approximately 39% in 2013, then increased by around 3% in 2014, and remain steady for the next year, outracing the rate of Sweden.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , Sweden
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Suggestion: Then
...than Finlands rate by approximately 8%. then, it rose to almost fifty percent in 201...
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Suggestion: , the
...to almost fifty percent in 2012. However,the figured showed a gradual decrease to ab...
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Suggestion: , reaching
...ecline steadily to the end of the period,reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low po...
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Suggestion: Percentage
... a low point of about 37% in 2015. percentage of divorces in Finland was less than 40...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...rce as opposed to almost half in Sweden.However, a figure experienced a steadily growth...
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Line 13, column 217, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('steadily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
...in Sweden.However, a figure experienced a steadily growth during the next two years. It rose to a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20108695652 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96689357189 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2534045791 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237851009267 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105057583168 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830541357381 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162965738077 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682872006403 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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