The bar chart shows the employment status of adults in the US in 2003 and 2013
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of employee in six different types of career in american between 2003 and 2013.
It is clear that there were increases in the percentage of people working in education training, the hotel industry, the building industry and self-employed whereas the opposite was true for the medical and business medical related jobs. Additionally, the unemployment rate dropped significantly in this time.
In 2003, education training, the hotel industry and the construction industry were three sectors having the lowest rate of employees, with approximately 8%, 4% and 10%, respectively. The figures for these areas all climed to share a similar percentage at closely two in ten throughout a decade. Surprisingly, the number of people in working age who ran their own business witnessed the largest growth, rising threefold virtually, from roughly one in ten in 2003 to just over 30% in 2013.
In 2013, the labour force in the US involving in business fields fell to nearly 30% after it had been the most popular occupation ten years ago. Eventually, the proportion of medical workers and people having no any jobs shrank to a half of that in the initial year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...on of medical workers and people having no any jobs shrank to a half of that in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14358974359 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90241913201 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7939504358 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.375 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14981107585 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576298658482 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720514861835 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977982801261 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777285069925 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.