The bar chart shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989.
The bar chart gives information about the fluctuation of residential prices in five different metropolises of USA, Spain, Japan, Germany, and UK from 1990 to 2002 compared to that in 1989.
It can be seen that, most of cities had house costs increased, apart from Frankfurt. In the first five years, the considerable and minimum proportion respectively went on metropolis Germany and UK. Meanwhile, in the next six years, the residential prices had changed significantly, London reached to the most popular during the whole period.
The most noticeable point of fluctuation in house prices was the dramatically dropped of Tokyo and London. The figure respectively went on under zero percent. However, Frankfurt, a city of Germany, remained the biggest percentage on residential cost, at approximately three percent.
There was a clear fluctuation in the next period, all of cities continued its upward trend, apart from Frankfurt. During 1996-2002, London had a strong fluctuation, reached to 11%, which it the most considerable changing during the whole period. However, in the last six years, the residential price of Tokyo was still under zero percent, but it had a slight changing compared to the first period. Apart from other metropolises, Frankfurt slightly decreased, from three percent during 1990-1995 to two percent in the last six years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cities') or simply say ''most cities''.
Suggestion: most of the cities; most cities
... to that in 1989. It can be seen that, most of cities had house costs increased, apart from F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, still, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35211267606 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97457764179 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530516431925 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0890908606 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209435545866 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818436077378 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912960922736 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159860679073 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106640864949 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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