The supplied bar chart give the information about the amout of people who traveled to four museums in London
It is evident that the statistics of travellers in four London museums fluctuated from June to December. Among all these figures, the highest was observed in August, which belonged to British Museum
Closer inspection of the diagram shows National Museum was the least visited museum in June, while the figure for three others was identical with 410,000 approximately in August.
After 2 months, quantity of British museum travellers significantly climbed up to 700,000 around, achieving the firt place among all. Meantime, although the data of people who came to History Museum also ascended, the increase was significant enough, so they stood at 2nd positions. While, the figure for National Museum travellers climbed up to a peak of 380,000 approximately, there was a slighlty fall to 400,000 of people visiting Science Museum.
In the last of period, the quatity of people travelling British Museum defintiely decended but it was the most visitors museum with 480,000. Smilarly, the number of National Museum and History Museum visitors clearly dropped to 180,000 and 280,000 respectively. In December, the data of the population who came to Science Museum gradually declined to 300,000 after it peaked at 500,000 in September
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
...defintiely decended but it was the most visitors museum with 480,000. Smilarly, the numb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32394366197 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73274121349 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5513581169 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.75 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288369080366 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127925890514 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100039823417 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177421852595 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856088986716 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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