The bar chart shows the percentage of small medium large companies which used social media for business purpose between 2012 and 2016

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentage of small, medium, large companies which used social media for business purpose between 2012 and 2016

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of social media which used for business by three different corporation: small, medium and large in the 5 years starting in 2012It can be seen that the expenditure of all business which paid for maketing in social network was the lowest in the year 2015. The opposite were true for the 3 corporation in the last yearWith regard to small business, the demand for social media was only 25% in 2012. Two following years, small company had an upward trend, changed to 10%. Medium business was around 30%, 50% in the first two years respectively. In 2015, the percentage of small company which used social media significantly decreased to 30%, similar to medium business. After that, two companies reached a peak to about 50%, 55% respectively. On the other hand, about 80% was spent by large business in 2012. The percentage of social media which plateued before hitting the lowest of the period downed to 55%. The year 2016, large business had similar percentage to the first year

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2021-12-19 angnhang 56 view

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'corporation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'corporations'.
Suggestion: corporations
...ch used for business by three different corporation: small, medium and large in the 5 years...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85057471264 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55976263102 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.2073285208 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475875566158 0.215688989381 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17885468014 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114842324949 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.475875566158 0.15604864568 305% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.