The bar chart shows type of media to get daily news by age group in 2011

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The bar chart shows type of media to get daily news, by age group in 2011

The bar chart compares the percentage of people in different age who update daily news through three types of media: social networking, microblogging and radio in 2011
It can be seen that radio was the most popular device which used by age group. However, microblogging was used less in three types of media.
With regard to social networking, 80% both people aged 10-17 and 18-29 used social media to get daily news, while the figure for the 50 to 54 years old was only half of 80%. The proportion of using microblogging was lowest, just only 20% people aged 10-17 used. And the number of people who read miro blogs to update news in daily plateued from 20% to 10%.
On the other hand, the figure for radio which the most popular device for almost people. While people aged 10-17 used radio was only 40%, the percentage of the 18-28 years old was significantly increased to around 90%. The people aged 30-49 and 50-54 years old had similar proportion

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66863905325 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31506938003 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526627218935 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5702054302 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248082393366 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107067738568 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10688573802 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180352513572 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123751367622 0.0819641961636 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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