The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2003 and projections for 2050

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050.

The bar chart gives information about changes in the populations of India, China, the USA and Japan during the period from 1950 to 2050.
Overall, there are general downward trends in the percentages of the population of China, the USA and Japan. Meanwhile, the figure for India experiences a reverse pattern. It is also clear that India and China are the two countries with the highest population compared to the others.
Starting at 15% in 1950, it is predicted that the population of India will increase continually to reach its highest point of around 18% in 2050.
In comparison, Chinese people accounted for nearly 23% of the total population, followed by roughly 7% of Americans and just under 5% of Japanese in 1950. Afterward, the proportions of Chinese and Japanese population is projected to fall significantly to 15% and around 1% respectively. Over the same period, there was a marked drop to 5% in the United States in 2002. Then, the forecast is that the figure will remain until 2050.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91764705882 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76868299672 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0469176389 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8888888889 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261905308391 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898693668085 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520028988308 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145916936511 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345852564232 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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