The bar chart shows the percentages of UK workforce in five major industries in 1841 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart shows the percentages of UK workforce in five major industries in 1841 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart compares the proportion of labors accounted for by five crucial fields of industry in the Great Britain over the course of 70 years starting in 1841.

A first glance at the chart reveals a downward trend in the industries. Nonetheless, a reverse one was seen in constructing buildings and services, which latter took place of mass production to require more workers than the others.

Looking at the details, the most striking feature observed in the 70-year period was the 48% increase in workforce distribution of the service sector, whose initial figure was only one third. By 2011, it became the most labor-required industry. Meanwhile, an opposite tendency was registered in goods production with its quantity of labors, previously making up just under 40 percent of British force of workers, declined deeply by 4 times. However, it is nowhere near as much as what statistic of food provision experienced, plummeting from 22% to 1%.

With regard to the least worker-demanding areas in 1841, albeit there were different patterns, the alterations were so minor. To specify, the amount of builders, human resource supplying energy and water remained taking the negligible percentage of labors force.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, third, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31958762887 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91461003258 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721649484536 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5731867966 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103280387193 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366880860882 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325079606327 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583321703645 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352459050626 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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