The bar chart shows the production of the world's oil in opec and non opec countries.Write ashort report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The bar chart depicts the formation of world's oil million barrels per day in OPEC middle East countries, other OPEC countries and non OPEC countries from the the period of 1980 to 2020.
Overall ,it is clearly seen that production of oil was maximum from the year 2000 to 2010 comparatively from other years.However, the production of oil is higher in opec middle East countries among all.
To begin with, during the year 1980 to 2000,the oil formation in OPEC middle East countries was about 2 million per day while in non OPEC countries it elevated to 10 million per day. However ,in the year 2000 to 2010, oil production was approximately 7 million per day and in other OPEC countries was 5 million per day and in non OPEC countries it rises with an increase of 1 million barrel per day and made it 6 million per day.Moreover, in the year 2010 to 2020 ,OPEC middle East countries had highest number of oil production with 16 barrels per day while rest of the nations had least number of oil generation.
Additionally, oil production in OPEC middle East countries increased with time which was totally opposite with non OPEC countries.Furthemore,oil generation by OPEC other than middle East firstly recognised in tear 2000, as no data of these countries could be found before this year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Suggestion: the; the
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78125 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91891578431 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459821428571 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.5866798233 43.030603864 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.2 112.824112599 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.8 22.9334400587 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267723896916 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204350590968 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663918267612 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217705812164 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682740330683 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.74 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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