The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

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The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

The bar chart illustrates the number of points that 3 different teams scored in 4 various seasons(2002-2005).
Overall, as it can be seen team B was the best team in all 4 seasons.
As is given in the chart, team B scores far exceed than 2 other teams every 4 seasons. In 2002 the scored point teams A, B, and C were 5, 82, and 10 respectively. In the next season last trend repeated with a little difference. In 2003 the distance reached points were as near as each other. In the 3rd season team A has a better result with 8 points less than team B and 23 points more than team C.In the last season team A and C could not reach the highest pointed score again and the best team was A repeatedly. Totally, team B was the best team in all seasons with 240 scored points.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rend repeated with a little difference. In 2003 the distance reached points were a...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ched points were as near as each other. In the 3rd season team A has a better resu...
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...n team B and 23 points more than team C.In the last season team A and C could not ...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n team B and 23 points more than team C.In the last season team A and C could not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 620.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13333333333 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47964155116 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9293250505 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311939417339 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160045893152 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115305128232 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248025613145 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685297507185 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.5 61.2550243902 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 11.4140731707 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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