The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates information about the scores of team A , B and C in four different seasons
Overall, team A experienced a upward trend, while team B and C showed a downward trend throughout the period. Three teams' scores had some fluctuations . Although team A initially had the lowest scores, it outtraced team C at the end of the period .
Team A 's scores were 5 in 2002, being lowerthan other teams by 77 , compared with team B and being 5 meanwhile team C . Then , they rose to 11 in 2003 and continued increasing dramatically to 35 in 2004. However, this figure showed a big decreasee to 8 at the end of the end of the period .
Scores of team B was 82 in the first season and being the first place . Fter that, it has a tremendous decrease to 60 in 2003 and went on declining steadily to the end of the period , hitting a low-point of 43 in 2004 . Then the figure experienced a slightly growth to 55 in 2005 . Team C's scores was ten in the 2002 and rose to 15 in 2004. During the next two seasons . Its scores declined slightly to 12 and decrease steadily to 5 , being the lowest scores of three teams .
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s information about the scores of team A , B and C in four different seasons O...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am A , B and C in four different seasons Overall, team A experienced a upward tre...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...seasons Overall, team A experienced a upward trend, while team B and C showed...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...Three teams scores had some fluctuations . Although team A initially had the lowes...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uttraced team C at the end of the period . Team A s scores were 5 in 2002, bein...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... 2002, being lowerthan other teams by 77 , compared with team B and being 5 meanwh...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...with team B and being 5 meanwhile team C . Then , they rose to 11 in 2003 and cont...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...am B and being 5 meanwhile team C . Then , they rose to 11 in 2003 and continued i...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...to 8 at the end of the end of the period . Scores of team B was 82 in the first...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...e first season and being the first place . Fter that, it has a tremendous decrease...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lining steadily to the end of the period , hitting a low-point of 43 in 2004 . The...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...riod , hitting a low-point of 43 in 2004 . Then the figure experienced a slightly ...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
...3 in 2004 . Then the figure experienced a slightly growth to 55 in 2005 . Team Cs scores was ten ...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...erienced a slightly growth to 55 in 2005 . Team Cs scores was ten in the 2002 and ...
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Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... 15 in 2004. During the next two seasons . Its scores declined slightly to 12 and ...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lightly to 12 and decrease steadily to 5 , being the lowest scores of three teams ...
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Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., being the lowest scores of three teams .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30952380952 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62454062428 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2466895813 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231187409213 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856364041588 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823766008013 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19753493741 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131177200109 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s information about the scores of team A , B and C in four different seasons O...
^^
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am A , B and C in four different seasons Overall, team A experienced a upward tre...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...seasons Overall, team A experienced a upward trend, while team B and C showed...
^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...Three teams scores had some fluctuations . Although team A initially had the lowes...
^^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uttraced team C at the end of the period . Team A s scores were 5 in 2002, bein...
^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... 2002, being lowerthan other teams by 77 , compared with team B and being 5 meanwh...
^^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...with team B and being 5 meanwhile team C . Then , they rose to 11 in 2003 and cont...
^^
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...am B and being 5 meanwhile team C . Then , they rose to 11 in 2003 and continued i...
^^
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to 8 at the end of the end of the period . Scores of team B was 82 in the first...
^^
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e first season and being the first place . Fter that, it has a tremendous decrease...
^^
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lining steadily to the end of the period , hitting a low-point of 43 in 2004 . The...
^^
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...riod , hitting a low-point of 43 in 2004 . Then the figure experienced a slightly ...
^^
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
...3 in 2004 . Then the figure experienced a slightly growth to 55 in 2005 . Team Cs scores was ten ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...erienced a slightly growth to 55 in 2005 . Team Cs scores was ten in the 2002 and ...
^^
Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... 15 in 2004. During the next two seasons . Its scores declined slightly to 12 and ...
^^
Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lightly to 12 and decrease steadily to 5 , being the lowest scores of three teams ...
^^
Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., being the lowest scores of three teams .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30952380952 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62454062428 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2466895813 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231187409213 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856364041588 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823766008013 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19753493741 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131177200109 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.