The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994 Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Write at least 150 words

The two bar graphs illustrates the statistics of both Marriage and Divorce in eight different countries in the years 1981 and 1984.

Overall, it is evident that, there is a constant downward trend in marriages of all the countries excluding Denmark. However, there are some fluctuations in the statistics of Divorce in both the years.

Initially, in the case of marriages, USA stands top in the position with 10 per thousand people, and experienced a slight dip in the year 1994 with 9 per thousand people. Despite of the decreasing trend in the year 1994, it still stands top comparatively with other seven nations. Similarly, all other countries experienced a downward trend in the year 1994 with the average of 6 to 4 per thousand people. However, in contrast with it, Denmark stood over 7 per thousand people in 1994.

As we can see from the divorce statistics, it was again America which surpassed all other nations. The countries USA and Denmark had a sharp dip of 0.5 and 0.7 respectively. Moreover, there is slight increased trend in the remaining countries. Interestingly, Germany plateaued at 2 per thousand people in the year 1981 and 1994.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95384615385 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88118428423 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9776203188 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8181818182 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119338378411 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546103266098 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526892214462 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102251543671 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599452727687 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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