The bar charts below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
Here, we have a set of a bar graph. The graph spells out the information pertaining a production and consumption of electricity in top ten countries at 2014. Production and consumption are measured in billion kWh.
Overall, the information is in descending order. The highest production and consumption of electricity is in China. It is 5,398 and 5,322 billion kWh respectively. However, less production and consumption of electricity is in Korea. It is 485.1 and 449.5 billion kWh respectively. Germany is that country who is more consumption energy than production.
To start with, USA is second most production and consumption of electricity. They are represented as 4,099 billion kWh for production and 3,866 billion kWh for consumption. Russia and Japan both are produce approximately more than 900 billion kWh. However uses of energy in both countries are 800 to 1000 billion kWh. In India and Canada are consumption of energy is lower than production, energy is produce nearly more than 600 to 800 billion kWh and consumption of energy is between 500 to 700 billion kWh in both countries.
In France, production of energy is 561.2 billion kWh and consumption is 462.9 billion kWh. In Brazil and Germany are produce electricity is 530 billion kWh, when consumption of energy is totally paradoxical in both countries. Brazil is use an energy 455.8 billion kWh and Germany is use more than 550 billion kWh. In Korea, both rates are almost same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 7.0 343% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 3.97073170732 554% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07531380753 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02942162033 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430962343096 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 84.5016018195 43.030603864 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204189552826 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117634348377 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108604683232 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184929962177 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118843511389 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.