The bar graph gives the information about the types of accommodation in holidays by the residents of four different countries ; England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland in the year 2010.
Overall, the hotel is preferred commonly by the people in all the countries and self-catering being the second most chosen holiday accommodation by three countries, except Northern Island, as caravan being the second popular choice.
To begin with, half of the population mostly prefer hotel as the best holiday accommodation and self-catering being the second preferrable option accounting around half of the hotel percentage and caravan being the least selected option in England. However, in Scotland the hotel is the most chosen one with about 52% and Camping being the least with 5%.
Wales people choice in the accommodation is almost similar to the people of England making hotel and caravan being the most and least preferred choices respectively. However, one-third people from Northern Ireland opted caravan as there second, best option and camping and self-catering share the equal proportions of 12% each.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to holiday'
Suggestion: to holiday
...f-catering being the second most chosen holiday accommodation by three countries, excep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, third, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46820809249 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83903392395 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49710982659 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5733352018 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.666666667 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131629085023 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781192628375 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795337897981 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105471056749 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832443202975 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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