The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban India in 2013, 2015 and 2017.
The following bar graph represents the literacy levels of males and females in india in 2013, 2015, 2017. This graph also shows the difference in literacy level of both gender in rural and urban areas.
Overall, those who lives in urban areas have higher literacy rate as compared to people who lives in rural areas. Moreover, literacy level of mens in rural areas is significantly higher than women in rural areas.
With regard of rural areas, mans have higher level of literacy rate as compared to women. While, literacy rate of rural mens grew tremendously from 57.87% to 77.15% over the time span of 2013 to 2017 as compared to female whom literacy rate rose moderately from 30.6% to 57.93% over the same time period as mention earlier.
The literacy level of urban male have significantly higher than female living in urban areas. Although, literacy rate in urban male has been slowly grew from 81% tp 88% in time period of 2013 to 2017. While, literacy rate of city-dwelling female is dramatically grew from 65% to 79% over periods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90502793296 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37765783173 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469273743017 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6015127535 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447408234531 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227222080168 0.103423049105 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160433554049 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325543856915 0.15604864568 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.206316868159 0.0819641961636 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.