The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The following bar chart illustrate the production and consumption of electricity of top ten countries in 2014.
Overall, china is on top of the list of countries in production as well as consumption of electricity.
In contrast, Korea,Rep. is on bottom of the list of countries in production and consumption of electricity.
With regard to production of electricity, china is on rank one by producing 5,398 billion kWh, united states on second rank by producing 4,099billion kWh and 3rd rank is of russia and so on. On last rank of the list is of Korea,Rep. by producing 485.1 billion kWh.
With regard to consumption of electricity, china is on rank Ist by consuming 5,322 billion kWh, united state is one the 2nd rank by consuming 3,866 billion kWh and on 3rd rank is russia by consuming1,038 billion kWh and so on. On last rank of the list is on Korea,Rep. by consuming 449.5 billionkwh.
However, on the list all the countries are successfully producing the amount of electricity to meet their need of consumption except Germany.
Germany is the only country in which consumption of electricity is bit much than their production of electricity.
- Radio and Television Audiences in UK 67
- The chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 67
- The Bar chart shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarise the information by select the main features, and make comparisons when relevant. 61
- The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban India in 2013 2015 and 2017 59
- The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban India in 2013, 2015 and 2017. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Rep
...ion of electricity. In contrast, Korea,Rep. is on bottom of the list of countries ...
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Line 15, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Rep
...on. On last rank of the list is of Korea,Rep. by producing 485.1 billion kWh. ...
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Line 21, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Rep
...n. On last rank of the list is on Korea,Rep. by consuming 449.5 billionkwh. ...
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Line 29, column 68, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
... in which consumption of electricity is bit much than their production of electrici...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, so, well, in contrast, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10824742268 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18560454387 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.386597938144 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.0598630187 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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