The bar graph provides information about the most Common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.
The proportion of boys and girls playing particular sports in New Zealand in 2002 is shown in the bar graph. It is evident that their sporting preference tended to be different.
Soccer was the most popular sports among the boys, proofed with the high participation rate of almost 25%. Meanwhile, the sports with least popularity between boys was netball with only below than 5% of participation. In contrast, netball became the most played sports the girls with 25% while the lowest participation was shown in cricket with approximately 1%.
The other sports such as swimming any other sports were also demanded among New Zealand’s children with approximately 20%. However, the tennis, basketball, martial arts, and athletics were less popular with only below than 10% participants
- The bar graph provides information about the most Common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. 56
- The proportion of money spent on various household expenses in Malaysia and Japan is shown in the pie chart 43
- In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? 78
- The illustrations show how chocolate is produced 73
- the three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...te of almost 25%. Meanwhile, the sports with least popularity between boys was netball wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 667.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.336 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87559663374 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.558652792 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228578357225 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121534356916 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127419858665 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183868155855 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114453008096 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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