The bar graph shows the number of car journeys into the city per day from 1996 to 2005
The chart elucidates the number of journeys with car into the city center by residents and non-residents over ten years period. The x-axis shows the years separated from 1996 to 2005. The y-axis quantifies the number of journey per day.
In 1996 an average of just under 10.000 people per day were being made by governments, while approximately half that umber were made by non-governments. Over the subsequent four years, people journey remained reasonably stable , while non-people journeys increased each year, exceeding 8.000 per day in 1999. In early 2000, parking meters were introduced into the city center, and this had the effect virtually halving resident traffic, although non resident traffic decreased only slightly.
By the end of 2002, the number of resident journeys had not significantly, but non resident journeys had risen to their 1999 level. At this point, Flamboyan street and Park Lane were pedestrianised. This resulted in a dramatic decline in non-resident traffic, and a slight decrease in resident traffic.
From this point onwords, resident traffic remained more or less at the same level, while non resident traffic resumed it is upward trend, reaching nearly 5.000 journeys per day in 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the years separated from 1996 to 2005. The y-axis quantifies the number of journey...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eople journey remained reasonably stable , while non-people journeys increased eac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34536082474 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78105736706 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4716757657 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268506722733 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129567916923 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985701745507 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197064903274 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140638532589 0.0819641961636 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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