The bar chart shows information about transportation preference among young people in Great Britain, USA, Germany and France.
The overall trend shows the car to be the most popular type of transportation among young people in all countries, except Germany. Besides that, it shows that the motorcycle is the least popular type in all countries, except in the USA.
The highest percentage of people who chose the car is shown to be in France (75%) whereas the lowest percentage is shown to be in Germany(40%). Great Britain and the USA has the same percentage for the car (60%). As far as the motorcycle percentage it varies between the four countries, being mostly used in the USA by (30%) of the young people, followed by a (15%) in Germany, and finally a (10%) in both Great Britain and France. As for the bicycle percentage, Germany and Great Britain show the highest percentage, at 45% and 30% respectively, while France and the USA percentages were at 15% and 10% respectively.
To sum it up, young people are shown to prefer using cars as their way of transportation instead of either using a motorcycle or a bicycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Britain) must be used with a third-person verb: 'shows'.
Suggestion: shows
...e percentage, Germany and Great Britain show the highest percentage, at 45% and 30% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77835051546 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84605642924 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489690721649 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.11869389 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.875 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275153140032 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14204409188 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131210109291 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220653593496 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120029315173 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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