The two pie charts show information about a survey's results taken for both boys and girls, it shows their participation in cultural and leisure activities.
Overall, both enjoyed listening to music with equal percentages but a dramatically larger number of girls liked reading. Furthermore, there are various activities and sports liked by children.
The boys' chart, shows that boys enjoyed playing computer games the most (34%). Followed by playing basketball (26%), and next in order comes soccer at a percentage of 17%. Skateboarding and listening to music were both quite close to each other at percentages of 11% and 10% respectively. Finally, reading was the least favourited activity among the six(2%).
Moving to the girls' chart, both dancing and reading were the most enjoyed activities, at 27% and 21% respectively. Followed by playing computer games (16%). Coming next is netball with 15%, and then gymnastics with 11%. Ultimately, listening to the music sector was the same as the boys' percentage, both at 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'boys'' or 'boy's'?
Suggestion: boys'; boy's
...to the music sector was the same as the boys percentage, both at 10%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28220858896 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84023240156 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.389054259 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177249173093 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659561418635 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932813463761 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131032633757 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113380581483 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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