The Barchart below demonstrates the various types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.
Summarize the facts by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The barchart represents the proportion of various kinds of accommodation selected during lay-days in 2010 by British people from 4 different regions, including England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland.
From the statistics, it can be inferred that hotel was the best choice for the British to stay in all parts of the UK. Whereas, there was a fluctuation in the percentage among 3 other accommodation types (caravanc camping and self-catering).
In the 2010s, the number of English making up their mind to stay at hotels accounted for the highest percentage and took up about 55%. In addition, Scotland ranked the second, at about 52%, which was followed by Wales and Northern Ireland, with 40% and 45% respectively.
Besides, self-catering was the second best choice among English, Scottish and Welsh. Nevertheless, it was less popular in Northern Ireland. Meanwhile, in Northern Ireland, over 30% of the population spent their holiday time on caravan, which was in preference to self-catering and camping. Specially, the proportion of holidaymakers in this nation staying in self-catering and camping witnessed the same rate, both around 12%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... followed by Wales and Northern Ireland, with 40% and 45% respectively. Besid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, nevertheless, second, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43888888889 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07636851009 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7771570405 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.777777778 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088162800675 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350409615375 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415249822732 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634794377734 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467618260899 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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