the below chart gives information about the ageing population worldwide in 2000 and makes predictions for 2050.
The graph shows the size and distribution of the worlds ageing population is likely to change over a 50 year period.
Overall, the proportions around the world are predicted to rise significantly. in 2000, just under ten percent of the worlds population was over 60, but by 2050,this will more than double to approximately 22 percent.
a closer look, at the data reveals that the ageing population is expected to rise more in some parts of the world than in others.in 2000 Europe had the largest group of ageing citizens,at 20 percent of its population. the second largest group could be found in North of America and the third in Oceania.while other countries were another categories.
By 2050,Europe is still going to have by far the greatest percentage of over 60s,with figures likely to reach 35 percent.however the biggest increase in this age group,relative to the rest of the population,are predicted to occur in Asia and Latin America.
all in all,Europe will maintain its lead in terms of its proportion of elderly citizens,the rate of increase in other parts of the world by 2050 will be much more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, so, still, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98941798942 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04244306201 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9532568813 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140026812425 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658763001108 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375551953906 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786813467617 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028842393644 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.