These days parent concern about their children regarding lots of unsuitable problems or canals on TV such as films, serials and cartoons even, so some people believe that the government should attention to this issue and another view is that what is essential for children, controlling them.in my opinion is that both of them have to responsible and they must work each other. Following we give reasons and argue about issue.
Generally every governments of countries have duties about their people, especially children. In fact, in every society educating and growing are important points for future of them. For example; the governments encourage artists, director or writer to making effective programs or even advertising another people that work on TV to built a constructive program for limit ages. In the other hand, if the governments help to society through suitable programs, it can be predicated countries will have safe societies in future for all world.
In addition, what is considerably essential in order to educate children is that parents have to learn and improve their knowledge for their children. It could be happened in several courses. For example the governments are able to get some classes for parents that how should react and manage their children regarding TV at home?.
In the whole, improving some skills for educating adults need to help and learn. Obviously there is a key point that not only the governments should help and make impressive situations, but parents also have vital roles about this that they control their children what material on TV is suitable and which one is damage for them.
- the below chart gives information about the ageing population worldwide in 2000 and makes predictions for 2050. 80
- It is often argued that children must be protected from unsuitable material on TV and the Internet by government censorship. Others say that this is the parents' responsibility to control what their children do and watch. To what extent do you think 73
- It is often argued that children must be protected from unsuitable material on TV and the Internet by government censorship. Others say that this is the parents' responsibility to control what their children do and watch. To what extent do you think 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50602409639 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34740822915 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6671231727 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 342.75 106.682146367 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.25 20.7667163134 300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.75 7.06120827912 308% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249375877143 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17400077693 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574747036175 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17400077693 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574747036175 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 13.0946893788 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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