The benefits of zoos.
The more advanced the world is, the less habitas of animals are. As a result, zoos play an important role in the world by some reasons. Firstly, zoos are built to preserve animals attuaclly endangered animals. Besides that, some animals is lacked of habitats to survive so the zoos which is a suitable places for those animals. Secondly, the zoos have some benefits for not just animals but for people too. It's provide job opportunities for the local people. People might apply for some vacancies such as animal feeders, protectors... and I think that could increase income for local economic. Last but not least, the zoos are good for educational children, teachers can lead students to the zoo to have more interesting courses, It may be help students have more understandable than in classes. In summary, the zoos have many benefits for animals and people can be influented positively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
...survive so the zoos which is a suitable places for those animals. Secondly, the zoos h...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, i think, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96644295302 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66575626698 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5799230399 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278769071616 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114193687256 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110526150315 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278769071616 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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