The first chart shows how million people were married and divorced while the second chart describes the percentage of marital status of grown up people from 1970 to 2000 in the USA.
Overall, marriage people were more than divorced people throughout the 30 years. Similarly, marital status of adults were married mostly instead of never married, widowed or divorced.
First of all, it can be seen the adults got married more than divorced overwhelmingly although marriage’s number were decreased approximately 2.5 million to 2 million in 30 years. It remained constant in 1970 and 1980. Otherwise, 1980 were the year of that people got most divorced, accounted for just under the 1.5 million and it decreased to just over 1 million in 10 years. However, about 1 million people got divorced in 1970 and 2000.
In second chart, while the marriage percentage were decline almost 70% to just under %60, never married adults increase averagely 5% in 30 years. Percentage of widowed persons were not change significantly and it made up around 5-7%. American adult people were divorced less than 10% in the years of 1970 and 2000 in despite of it rose from well under to almost 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
The first chart shows how million people were married and divorced while ...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...nd chart, while the marriage percentage were decline almost 70% to just under %60, n...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
... Percentage of widowed persons were not change significantly and it made up around 5-7...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, similarly, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97487437186 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53338108996 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502512562814 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4957892871 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206234597327 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977395697957 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665230971863 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146714615053 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362318305362 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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