Carbon dioxide emissions produced by five different sectors in United Kingdom in 970 2000

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Carbon dioxide emissions produced by five different sectors in United Kingdom in 970-2000.

The cart bellow provides information of Carbon dioxide emission in United Kingdom that was produced by five different sectors during 1970-2000. Overall, Carbon dioxide emission quantity by all sectors was different in each year.
To begin with, in 1970 the biggest emission was produced by industrial factory at around 65 million tonnes. In the next decade it dramatically fallen in 1980 at around 43 million tonnes and continue slightly decreased up to 38 million tonnes in 1990. Whereas, it little rose in next decade at 39 million tonnes. Similar with fluctuation of industrial combustion emission, domestic sector had same form as industrial combustion but in different amount. In 1970 domestic produced 28 million tonnes emission and fallen up to 23 million tonnes in next decade. It still dropped into 21 million tonnes in 1990 and rose up to 26 million tonnes in 2000.
However, power plant produced 58 million tonnes in 1970 as same as in 1980. Next decade it dropped up to 55 million tonnes and 43 million tonne in 2000. In other hand, transport sector produced the emission quite low than domestic in 1970 at 28 million tonnes and still rose in each year. In the end of 2000 transport emission had reached 37 million tonnes. However, the fewest emission were produced by other sectors as much 11 million tonnes in 1970, rose up to 15 million tonnes in 1980 and in 1990 it emission turn back as same as in 1970. In 2000 other sectors produced 12 million tonnes of emission.
To conclude, carbon dioxide emission dropped almost in every sector.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, still, whereas, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89772727273 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48756088103 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424242424242 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7943232336 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28069574622 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138689310082 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148165458243 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275854811551 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191816386052 0.0819641961636 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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