Six pie charts demonstrate the data regarding the proportion of water used for three factors in five continents.
As can be seen from the charts, the usage of water has a similar pattern in North America and Europe. The fraction for industrial usage of water is with the highest numbers: the former is accounted for nearly a half, the latter for four percent more. Consequently, water allocated for agriculture and home is consumed together in an almost equal percentage of industrial but in a reverse pattern - 52% in North America and 47% in Europe.
Similarly, three other parts of the world - Africa, Central and South West Asia - use water likewise. Agriculture makes up a particularly large portion in terms of consumption of water in all terrains(approximately 84%), while industry and house needs play a minor role in usage of water(about 7% in average). On the other hand, South America has a similarity in usage with this group but not in the percentages, which are fracionaly different - agricultural usage is three-fourth, which leads to the fact that two other options are between 10% and 20%.
Overall, developed countries devote most of their water in industry, whereas developing areas are tended to use water more for agriculture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, likewise, regarding, similarly, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09268292683 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0247712457 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7197021235 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177458280565 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804042942596 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408498536036 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112985099461 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228123783619 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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