the cause telling a lie

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the cause telling a lie

Sometime, people lie because of an unconscious reflex. But a lie is still a deliberate act of human being. There are many causes of deception in humans.
In my opinion, the most common reason people lie is the need to hide the truth. The day after day, many cases have forced us to fall into certain situations that we can’t reveal the truth, and therefore we need to hide it from others. Besides, we’re lying to save ourselves from different kinds of trouble, and for convenience. Example,when you don’t do your homework before you go to your class, you will lie to the teacher as not to get out of the consequence.
On the other hand, we must lie for fear of what we don’t know, afraid of what others think of themselves and to face the truth. Lying can because you want to cover the truth when you’ve done something wrong and don’t want to face the consequence.
To sum up, to built a certain progressive and fair society must remove to the lie and forge it from human life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, still, therefore, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4861878453 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44593566222 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60773480663 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1989247156 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201955778948 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916103435734 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446520249696 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135449117742 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740346878388 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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