Adults should spend time working rather than playing In no more than 250 words write an essay to state whether you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your opinions In no more than 250 words write an essay to state whether you agree or disagr

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pinion because of following reasons. On the one hand, I would agree that adul...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'balance'
Suggestion: balance
...out playing for fun, your life will not balanced. On the other hand, spending ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or fun, your life will not balanced. On the other hand, spending too much tim...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , every
...will make life out of balance. Every day,every weekend you should spend a little time ...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Take
...elive stress after tiring working hours.Take some of your busy work time to play. Wh...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'funned'.
Suggestion: funned
...r busy work time to play. When you have fun it will help you feel more comfortable...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you have fun it will help you feel more comfortable and will you have more time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54838709677 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16235890772 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3984057419 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225781314829 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120910671675 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724959225517 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17421708083 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502568258813 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.