Chain Food Production in US
The picture illustrates the process that is used in food productions in United States.
Initially, many food resources such as red meats, rice and fishes are likely consumed by society. Rice and vegetables as the important things are harvested by farmer, while red meats and milk are found by farmhouse in the villages kept and feed by cattlemen with good nutrition, and fishes are group by fisherman from the sea. The next step, the compliments are cleaned, labelled and packaged with a good packing as much as needed. Afterward, all the products are distributed to different types of market, such as retails and restaurants.
The products are distributed to retailers and sold with a lowest price to the consumer, while bought by people as home preparation consumed by families as a homemade foods. On the other hand, products bought by the restaurant are cooked into several kind of dishes such as steaks, sausages, and other modern meals before it is served to the consumer.
Overall, there are several steps of food chain productions in US, where all products are distributed into two different types of market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arket, such as retails and restaurants. The products are distributed to retailer...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... distributed to retailers and sold with a lowest price to the consumer, while bou...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'food'?
Suggestion: food
...tion consumed by families as a homemade foods. On the other hand, products bought by ...
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...ought by the restaurant are cooked into several kind of dishes such as steaks, sausages, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10215053763 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70401781368 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5638003174 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290237473938 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122543862354 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144904212741 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210214477578 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159122382516 0.0819641961636 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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