Consuming junk food too much without any controlling in western is commonly biggest failure of people’s poor diet nowadays. Due to the people in UK habit for eating many convenience food, although they understand well that it is not good and be affected to the diet program. They should change their diet program with vegetarian program and any sport continuing such as running and yoga.
Leading of those situations, luxury lifestyle by accustomed for consuming snack too much, without thinking about the impact and consequences of what is done to be a lot of things happening among Westerners. As a result, too fat and diabetes become a phenomenon that often occurs, especially among them. Detik.com said in their result about western habit that commonly they consume their fast food twice in a days, mostly at noon and night. Furthermore, over weight and many diseases are such problems that they faced in modern era, for 80% overall people.
Then how to solve this problem? Maintaining a healthy lifestyle by becoming a vegetarian is in most of the opinions that are said, although some prefer to maintain a healthy lifestyle with sports such as running and yoga. However, changing healthy lifestyles by stopping consuming fast food and increasing consumption of vegetables and sports is the solution to the problems faced by many people today. Such as liputan6.com discuss that to be health is priceless, because it is only about commitment to their self, how care everyone. It is why, sport is the one way an easiest to do.
In conclusion, western people likely to spend their time to consume fast food, without balancing it with regular healthy lifestyle such as consuming vegetables, fruit and exercise will have an impact on the body affected by disease and obesity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...y they consume their fast food twice in a days, mostly at noon and night. Furthermore,...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...eryone. It is why, sport is the one way an easiest to do. In conclusion, wester...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04782608696 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70979808677 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604347826087 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.837103575 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20042347534 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681821220149 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599843531061 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13991783247 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453593669112 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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