The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The japans trends of population for present, past and future is shown by table and graph. The graph depicts the number of population in milllion from 1950 to 2055 with five year interval from 19050 to 2015 then 20 years interval for the remainning two and table provides the figure of 19950, 2005, 2035 and 2055 in terms of population aged 65 years or above and percentage of total population aged 65 years or above. The number of population increases from past to present and decreases in future, while the number of population aged 65 or above and their percentage increase for past, present and future.
In is clearly seen in the information provided that the highest number of population in millions is 125.4 in 2015 and the highest number of population aged 65 year or above is 36.5 millions in 2055 i.e, 41%. In contrast, the lowest number of population is 84.1, lowest population aged 65 years or above is 4.1 and lowest percentage is 4.9% is in 1950.
The total population graph is continously increasing from 1950 to 2015 and in fulture it will decrease. but the population aged 65 or above and their percentage is increased for all the three trends.
In conclusion, the population of japan is increased from past but it decreased in future, as the number of population aged 65 or above is increased .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'trend'.
Suggestion: trend
The japans trends of population for present, past and fut...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'interval' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'intervals'.
Suggestion: intervals
...lllion from 1950 to 2055 with five year interval from 19050 to 2015 then 20 years interv...
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Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...otal population aged 65 years or above. The number of population increases from pas...
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Line 1, column 488, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ases from past to present and decreases in future, while the number of population aged 65...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the lowest'.
Suggestion: , the lowest
... the lowest number of population is 84.1, lowest population aged 65 years or above is 4....
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...o 2015 and in fulture it will decrease. but the population aged 65 or above and the...
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Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...is increased from past but it decreased in future, as the number of population aged 65 or...
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Line 13, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...population aged 65 or above is increased .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76086956522 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62494059934 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391304347826 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6749618256 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109161228608 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657043369513 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288686476276 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787490445999 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193367618169 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.