The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart and table provides the details of the number of population in Japan between 1950 to 2055. The units measured in millions.
Overall, at the beginning of period japan population was least and the people aged 65 years or over is also less as it goes the number of population also gradually increases. In the end period, the population will start decreasing but the 65 years aged people and overpopulation will be increasing.
On the one hand, the population of Japan at the starting period was 84.1 and the number of aged people who aged 65 years or more was around 4.1 millions as the year progresses the number of population also rose. During 1955 to 1965, the population rose from 90 to 99.2 million. In 1970, the population of Japan crossed 100 million and then gradually increasing till 2005 and the number of people aged was increased from 4.9% in the initial period to 20% with 25.7 million.
On the other hand, the number of people started slowly decreasing in 2010 it was 127.1 million and in 2015 it is 125.4 million. In 2035, it predicted that the overall population will be decreased to 110 million. However, the population of aged people over 65 years will continue to be increasing with 37.2 million and the percentage of the total population will rose to 34%. At last, the population will fall under 90 million and the aged people will also decrease by 0.7 million but the percentage of total aged people will be increased to 41%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ople aged 65 years or over is also less as it goes the number of population also g...
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Line 13, column 363, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rise'
Suggestion: rise
...percentage of the total population will rose to 34%. At last, the population will fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70542635659 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52564516125 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422480620155 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1241303635 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.363636364 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863082684757 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464894446934 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391783796701 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762548587865 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277399549388 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.