The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented bar graph and table illustrates how the population varies from the past to future in Japan over the time period of 1950 to 2055.

It is observable from the bar graph that for in the past population in Japan followed rising trend, but after some years it followed decreasing trend up-to the end of the period. Also, the percentage of population whose age is 65 years or over is increasing throughout the period.

It is clear from the bar graph that in the year 1950 the population of Japan was 84.1 millions. It followed increasing trend and achieved its maximum in the year 2005 at 127.8 millions. After 2005 the population in Japan followed downward trend. Moreover, it will follow downward in future also. The population Japan in 2055 will be 89.9 millions.

However, In the year 1950 the population aged 65 years or over in Japan was 4.1 millions and their percentage was 4.9% of the total population. It followed upward trend throughout the period, Which will achieve its maximum value in 2055 at 36.5 millions at 41% of total population.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mum in the year 2005 at 127.8 millions. After 2005 the population in Japan followed d...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...over, it will follow downward in future also. The population Japan in 2055 will be 8...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79347826087 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54994996059 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445652173913 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0742201354 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869320574691 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476969814764 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362352766817 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645505151793 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219177020949 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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