The bar graph displays the number of hospital beds per thousand citizens in eight different nations and the table illustrates the budget spend on the healthcare of a person and the average lifetime in Japan, the Netherlands, and the USA.
Overall, Japan has the highest number of beds per thousand people, while the other countries have approximately the same number of beds except for Germany, which is in second place. America spends the highest amount of money on the health of a citizen and the Japanese have the longest life expectancy.
Japan has 14 hospital beds per 1000 people and Germany’s hospitals have 8 beds per 1000 citizens. Australia has 4 beds, while the Netherlands has around 4.1 per 1000 people. Canada, Spain, the UK, and the USA have the lowest number of beds with around 3.8 per 1000 population, approximately 4 times lower than Japan’s value.
The USA spends $6719 per person for their medical care, the highest amount of money, while only &2581 is spent by Japan, which is approximately 3 times lower. The Netherlands spends around half of the USA’s value, with $3481. An average person in Japan lives 83 years, while the average life expectancies in America and the Netherlands are 78 and 80 years, respectively.
- In many countries a small number of people earn extremely high salary Some people believe that is good for the country but others think that governments should not allowed salaries above a certain level Discuss both these view and give your own opinion 84
- The map below shows three proposed sites for a new hypermarket A B and C in the city of Pellington 84
- Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production Some people think that as land is becoming scarce the world s meat consumption should be reduced What measures could be taken to reduce the world s meat consumption What kinds of problem m 73
- Some people say that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries shops and public transport Do you agree or disagree 61
- Line graph number of visitors per month in summer 2013 In thousands 86
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95714285714 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64656111101 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7586883641 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.060189414162 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026966282559 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351284666241 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469122141057 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359952680964 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.